Debbie-T : "Lover’s Kiss"

Friday June 24, 2011

Many thanks to the creator of this image.

“Lover’s Kiss”
Poem by: Debbie-T
Eyes aligned
Voice confined
Thoughts defined
Hearts combined
*
Heads inclined
Tongues opined
Lips redesigned
Flavor grind
*
Inhibitions
Fallen behind
Hands entwined
Resistance resigned
*
Breath panted
Flesh heated
Senses ignited
Souls refined
For
Lover’s Kiss
Is
Love signed.

   “Lover’s Kiss” Copyright ©Debbie-T 2011. All Rights Reserved.

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5 comments:

  1. oo la la...yes and you accentuate the moment well with your words...grind on...smiles.

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  2. The monorhyme you maintain for most of the piece is quite something; I didn't realise so many things rhymed with 'aligned' :)

    The fact that you switch at the end is a nice contrast and makes the closure more emphatic

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  3. what a beautiful signature - in a kiss

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  4. enjoyed the lines, a pure tribute to the purest form of expressing love. the rhyme in the lines is reminiscent of a kiss too which has a rhythm to it... just like the heartbeats of the lovers

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