Despoina – A Lethal kiss

Sunday, June 5/2011

Photograph: Purple Phase, by Rob Hanson
 
A Lethal kiss
Poem by: Despoina  
 
His kiss’ essence flows into her throat;
Slowly, drop by drop, torturing her senses.
Her lips, are getting cold,
Her tongue, numbed.
Her mouth’s, like a blue violet,
Unable to whisper.
He’s looking at her…
His eyes are glowing.
His gaze’s dazzled by ecstasy!
He poisoned her unfortunate heart
 That’s beating to the slow repeats of a deadly tango!
Copyright ©2011 Despoina /The “Love essence” Collection - “A Lethal kiss”/All Rights Reserved.
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5 comments:

  1. takes two to tango though...all depends on the intent of the poison though i guess...is it love she succumbs or worse...

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  2. Hypnotic repetition and colorful use of sensory description... The ending is fantastic.

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  3. "he poisoned her unfortunate heart" a perfect line to end this!

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  4. elegant finish.
    very eloquent write.

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  5. Quite impressive job.
    Check out our potetry potluck week 38 today,
    With Kavita/Olivia starring the show.
    First time participannts feel free to share 1 to 3 old poems or random poems in case you don’t have anything fitting our theme (inspired by a song).
    Come on it nOW.
    We love your talent!
    Hugs
    xoxox

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